Writing Project
A friend of mine is working on a book and she wanted a male perspective. Below is her request and what I was able to come up with initially. I just have to come up with my description for her. The character names are Saint and Amina
Stephen:
AT YOUR CONVIENENCE, would you please be Saint, and describe from the moment you pull up to the restaurant, until you are actually seated next to Amina.
By the way, you’re startled because of how naturally beautiful she is, and the vibe you both share during the initial eye contact. Thanks!!
The moment that I walked through the door our souls connected. It was like seeing Amina
for the first time. I knew from that very moment that I desired her. I don’t mean that in a
sexual way, but a spiritual form of possession or maybe I wanted her to possess me. I stood at
the door for a moment as we both locked eyes. We were smiling at each other as if we both had
good news to tell. “Can I help you sir?” The host at the door asked as I stood there watching
Amina unable to move. “Sir….can I help you?” The hostess repeated as I turned around to give
her my attention. “Thank you, but I see exactly who I’m looking for. She’s sitting right over
there.” The hostess smiled as if she knew what my intentions were. I smiled back at her to
confirm her thoughts.
Stephen:
AT YOUR CONVIENENCE, would you please be Saint, and describe from the moment you pull up to the restaurant, until you are actually seated next to Amina.
By the way, you’re startled because of how naturally beautiful she is, and the vibe you both share during the initial eye contact. Thanks!!
The moment that I walked through the door our souls connected. It was like seeing Amina
for the first time. I knew from that very moment that I desired her. I don’t mean that in a
sexual way, but a spiritual form of possession or maybe I wanted her to possess me. I stood at
the door for a moment as we both locked eyes. We were smiling at each other as if we both had
good news to tell. “Can I help you sir?” The host at the door asked as I stood there watching
Amina unable to move. “Sir….can I help you?” The hostess repeated as I turned around to give
her my attention. “Thank you, but I see exactly who I’m looking for. She’s sitting right over
there.” The hostess smiled as if she knew what my intentions were. I smiled back at her to
confirm her thoughts.
Comments
That totally grabbed me in, I want to read more. That is really, really good. You can totally feel what you are describing! Wonderful as usual! :0)
writing, I really enjoyed it.
Have a good day, big guy.
felt like i was in the middle of a Eric Jerome Dickey novel (the good parts lol).
you should really keep writing.
and i thought the host was a man because you said "host" and not "hostess" (just somthing to consider for your book *smile* don't confuse us!)
Ah ha!! Of course...I should've said hostess! :) Thank you! Yeah, I didn't get a chance to run her down (looks) yet. I don't know if I should pick up from there or insert it right after seeing her?
stunuh jay-
I know! That eye sex is the bomb. :)
I'm going to try and describe her tonight and post tomorrow. :)
This will be fun! Thanks for the input.
I am intrigued by the reference "host" and then... "she"
Maybe the host was a man with a feminine disposition or vice versa. However, the writer's mind is too immensed shall I say mesmerized ..to actually try and figure all that out. The author clearly states the spiritual connection you can only feel when you have the best physical accompaniment. Stephen, I hope I did not lose bro, your writing is music...it is great whether you go Accapella, or you are accompanied by a Calabash drum.. I can almost hear that basso continuo!!!!!
It's good to be in love, it's a risk worth taking ya'll :)
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That happened here. Moreover, like a good dream, I didn't want it to be over. I wanted you to take me over to that table and I wanted to see her through you.
I wanted the rest of it (I even started to write the next part in my head)...so get on your pen (or keyboard) Mr. Bess!!!